Tuesday, October 28, 2014

pretty street

Kenny looked at the end of the street 
Kenny looked at the end of the street, but Nathan didn't come here
Kenny's heart broken when he looked at the end of the Lonely street, but Nathan didn't come here.
In the evening, Kenny's heart broken when he looked at the end of the Lonely street, but Nathan didn't come here.

Tuesday, October 14, 2014

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I have changed

I did a big changed in this ESL 100 course, especially i finish my homework and reading and in-class essay. i remember i am a lazy in the last semester. But i have changed a lot in this semester.
Because of the pasting of times, i realize that i need to finish my academic and  i must as soon as possible to work. I cant wait to still studying, because i am a man, i need to finish my dream and cant keep staying in my ESL 100

Monday, October 6, 2014

As a writer

           As a writer, it is the most difficult thing to write is in the second language. Also, writing needs lots of time to think, and imagine. In order to write a good paragraph, a writer should read lots of things and think lots of story.  Especially, when a writer want to write something about himself, it should not only including real story and even some imagining.
          Writing just like a place that you talk whatever you talk. In my writing experience, i believed that if you put more ideas and feelings in your story, it will be more lively and better.